tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6649591714373684167.post9059821130058131995..comments2024-02-29T16:43:55.241-05:00Comments on Lurking Rhythmically: Curse/Or: The complete story thus farErin Palettehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09984632637166408245noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6649591714373684167.post-42813809457971969282008-09-22T03:04:00.000-04:002008-09-22T03:04:00.000-04:00I like what you've written so far. The scenes are ...I like what you've written so far. The scenes are full of detail, like a visceral reading experience. I want to know why she's so angry, and (wow) violent. The change from first to third person threw me a bit, but then it seemed like maybe a prologue? Looking forward to reading more.Reddyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826128578109099598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6649591714373684167.post-4135881636229123222008-09-19T00:51:00.000-04:002008-09-19T00:51:00.000-04:00Yeah, Kat has it right. a very Palahniuk vibe. and...Yeah, Kat has it right. a very Palahniuk vibe. and I mean with all possible praise. this is masterfully done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6649591714373684167.post-70340802303886241752008-09-17T17:52:00.000-04:002008-09-17T17:52:00.000-04:00Wow, quite the scene in the car. I thouroughly enj...Wow, quite the scene in the car. I thouroughly enjoyed that part of chapter 1+. <BR/><BR/>You've got me asking what's next, and that's awesome. :)Nathanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17604121470547776811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6649591714373684167.post-88586453018321010372008-09-17T14:15:00.000-04:002008-09-17T14:15:00.000-04:00Oooh.. I like this Pal. Haven't I told you bef...Oooh.. I like this Pal. Haven't I told you before that this reminds me of Chuck Palanuik? :D It's great. Can't wait to read more. But I noticed you switch to first person to third. :< It's interesting. D< You got me interesting in Esther and who she is and stuffies..STOP MAKING ME CURIOUS. >=(Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com